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So, time passed, and _____ and Arthur became closer as friends. As a result, their feelings for each other grew as well. Still, they refused to act on them. Rather than confess their feelings to each other and risk their friendship, they entered relationships with others. None of which lasted very long because it became obvious early on that they were enamored with one another.

It wasn't obvious to them,  however. They didn't think their feelings were mutual.   

Then one day they were stargazing, and it happened...    

"You shouldn't worry about him. He's a loser anyway." He assured her.

"I know. I guess I just thought... he was the one."

That was a lie, of course. She cared about and loved the boy. But she didn't think he was the one. Deep down, she knew it.
"Well he wasn't, and I think you're better off."

"You're right."

"Listen, _______? Have you ever considered... That maybe..."



"Tell me!"

"No, it's stupid."




Arthur growled. "Fine. Have you thought about what it'd be like if... We started dating?"


"I told you it was stupid."

"No, it's not. And I have thought about it."


"Well, yeah. A lot."

"Well um... Me too."

The façade had been broken. They finally acknowledged how they felt for so long... And they were relieved. So relieved they laughed.

"Its crazy though, right? The thought of us together."

"Yeah. You and me as a couple; it's weird!"

"I know! Holding hands,  going out on dates..."

"Getting gifts, doing things for each other..."

"Haha yeah."

They looked at the sky.

"Hey, um... How about some music?"


He turned on the radio and the intro to something stupid played 

"Oooh! I love this song!"


She jumped up and danced (he guessed) some sort of ballet. And he couldn't help the cheesy thoughts popping into his head. Like how beautiful and graceful she looked in the moonlight. 
She looked at him and smiled. Then she grabbed his hand

"Come on! Dance with me!"

"I don't know how to dance like that!"

"Then I'll dumb it down for you!"

</i> I know you stand in line, until you think you have the time 
To spend an evening with me 
And if we go someplace to dance, I know that there´s a chance 
You won't be leaving with me </i>

Truth be told, though they were laughing and she was singing along, she was very nervous. The reason she loved that song was because it reminded her of them. And she was telling him how she felt.

And afterwards we drop into a quiet little place 
And have a drink or two 
And then I go and spoil it all, by saying something stupid 
Like: "I love you"

She whispered the last part. She blushed heavily and so did he 

I can see it in your eyes, that you despise the same old lies 
You heard the night before 
And though it´s just a line to you, for me it´s true 
It never seemed so right before

This did feel right, more right to both of them than any other relationship they'd ever been in.

I practice every day to find some clever lines to say 
To make the meaning come through 
But then I think I´ll wait until the evening gets late
And I´m alone with you 

The time is right, your perfume fills my head, the stars get red 
And oh the night´s so blue 
And then I go and spoil it all, by saying something stupid 
Like:" I love you"

By this time their eyes were fixed on each other 

(" I love you, I love you,....")
With each "I love you", their ifaces got closer. Their eyes closed. Until their lips met.  

And it was like fireworks. It was what they wanted for so long... It was different.

"And that was something stupid, by Frank and Nancy Sinatra! We're gonna go to break..."

The announcers voice broke them apart, and both backed up 2 feet

"Um... what just happened?"

"I don't know... I'm so sorry."


"Yeah...I just, I've had these feelings for you for such a long time."

"You... You have?"

"Well yeah. Ever since I first met you."

"I've had feelings for you too..."

"What? Really?"


The two finally made eye contact and smiled. They took each other's hand and gazed at the beautiful night sky.
I'm expecting to either constipate people with the cheesiness or make them diabetic with the sweetness of this story.

This was actually the end of a fanfictiom story I wrote a couple years ago that will never see the light of day. Because of that, England may be OOC. I was torn between who I thought would be a good character for this story; England or Canada. I think I made the right choice, but whatever.

That's also why the story starts awkwardly.

Despite all that, I hope you enjoy
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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americanlover152 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
now miss (name) would you like some of my famous scones?
powerpuffgirlsZbuble Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hGuwgwg...Fluff overload!!  And you definetley made the right choice! ;)
kushamisaru Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You think so? I'm leaning more towards canada now :/
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!
powerpuffgirlsZbuble Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah; but, maybe it has everything to do with the fact that England's my favourite...*chuckles* But maybe you could do another story like this, only with Canada? :) 
miyumiTHEZERO Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*squeels* kyaaaah~!!! ish sho FLUFFEH
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