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"Damn it, Alfred!" ______ groaned as the lights suddenly went off. She grabbed her flashlight (this happened often enough that she was prepared now) turned it on, and stormed to their bedroom.

"Heheh... Hey babe." Alfred chuckled nervously, face like this ^^;

"Don't give me that!" ____ growled. "I thought you were gonna pay the electric bill!"

Alfred sighed. "I'm sorry, _____.  I didn't have the money..."

"You could've asked me!"

_____ was the breadwinner in this relationship. Alfred had a job, but it was seasonal and didn't pay very well. Being a bit of a macho man, Alfred was extremely embarrassed by this fact. So he never went to _____ for money, no matter how many times she assured him it didn't make her think less of him.

"I know..." he conceded, laying down on the bed. _____ sat down next to him.

My girlfriend's got a boyfriend, funny
He doesn't make a dime all day
And all her girlfriends' boyfriends make money
What more can I say?


"I guess I'll just pay it tomorrow then..." _____ groaned. At that moment, her flashlight's battery went. She growled and laid down.
"Great, now what?!"

Alfred smirked and turned to her. "We could make love." he suggested. "This is kind of romantic, right?"

_______ blushed and turned away. "H-hardly!"

"Come onnnnn, you know you can't stay mad at me."

"Oh yes I can!"

"No you can't! Know why?"

He didn't wait for an answer; he simply pounced her and began tickling her.

"Alfred! Haha-this isn't-hahaha-fair!" ______ protested.

"Say you forgive me!" Alfred demanded. And after a bit of tickling, ______ gave in.

"Ahahalright! I forgive you!" she said. Alfred stopped and the two just stared at each other lovingly.

"Hey, Alfred?" ______ asked rather timidly, face turning red.

"Yeah?"

"Does your offer still stand?"

"...HELL YEAH IT DOES!"

______ giggled and pulled him down for a kiss.

It's true
He never made it through a day of school
The only thing he studied was you
He knows your body better than you do


People say "It's as easy to fall in love with a rich man as it is a poor one." ______ used to think that was bullshit until she met Alfred. They may not have been poor, but their lives were a bit of a struggle. Still, neither of them could be happier, even with all the little fights they would have.

Maybe I'm your Mr. Right
Baby, maybe I'm the one you like
Maybe I'm a shot in the dark
And you're the morning light
Whoa
Maybe this is sad but true
Baby, maybe you've got nothing to lose
You could be the best of me
When I'm the worst for you


A few days later, the couple were on a bus where the following conversation took place:

"I still don't get why I have to go..."

"Don't you like hanging out with Antonio?"

"Yeah, Antonio is okay. It's his girlfriend I can't stand! She's such a bitch, and I always get stuck hanging out with her while you guys hang out."

"Sorry babe. She likes you better than us. Must be because you both have-"

_____ covered his mouth, face bright red. "You owe me. Let's leave it at that."

"Making stuff up to you is fun for me too, so alright!" he winked.

"Shut up." she giggled, pushing him playfully.

My girlfriend's got a boyfriend, running
To catch the bus to meet
To meet up with the boyfriend's girlfriend who's stunning
She's such a sight to see


Antonio and his girlfriend Lovina already seemed to be at each other's throats. Or at least, Lovina was at his throat.

"This is not Tiffany's, idiota!" Lovina chided as _____ tried to shrink. Really? She couldn't wait until they weren't in public?

"Ah! I'm sorry!" Antonio pleaded.

_______ sighed. "Why does he put up with that?"

Alfred shrugged. "He says he loves her."

God, what does hate look like to him?

It's true
The moment he laid eyes on you he knew
The only wish he wanted came true
He knows he's lucky that he met someone like you


"Hey, _____!" Lovina chirped, flipping her bitch switch off. "Guess what? Antonio just proposed to me!"

^^;

"R-really? Congratulations! That's so great!"

Antonio and Lovina were in a very different boat than Alfred and _______. Antonio was filthy rich and had spent most of  his relationship with Lovina buying her whatever her heart desired, only to have her snap at him when she changed her mind at the last minute.

After an exhausting day of Lovina whining about what she didn't get, it was finally time to go home.

Maybe I'm your Mr. Right
Baby, maybe I'm the one you like
Maybe I'm a shot in the dark
And you're the morning light
Whoa
Maybe this is sad but true
Baby, maybe you've got nothing to lose
You could be the best of me
When I'm the worst for you


"Man, I just don't get what he sees in her..." ______ pondered out loud.

"Me neither..." Alfred sighed.

There was a pause.

"Still... I'd love to be in his place."

"... Rich with Lovina as a fiancee?"

Alfred laughed. "No. Well, kind of. I wish I could get you anything you wanted, or at least provide you with the basics..."

______ sighed. "Alfred, I would think you'd learn from their relationships that material things don't get you love. People love you for you." she snuggled up to him. " I love you for you."

You can always change your mind
And you, can't change mine
No you can't change mine


Alfred smiled. "Thanks _____. I love you too."

Maybe I'm your Mr. Right
Baby, maybe I'm the one you like
Maybe I'm a shot in the dark
And you're the morning light
Whoa
Maybe this is sad but true
Baby, maybe you've got nothing to lose
You could be the best of me
When I'm the worst for you


"You still owe me though." ______ reminded him.

"Yeah, I know."

I'm the worst for you
I think I may be in love with this band.
That's never happened to me before.

I've never fallen for a boy band before.

Anyway, some stuff you should know.

*The music video focuses on two couples; one that's poor as dirt, but happy together, and another where the boyfriend is rich and buys his girl all these nice things, but she kind of shrugs it off. I tried to incorporate that into this story, and I think I did an okay job. It could've been better, but it's still okay.

*I have no issues with Romano, or Spamano, even though I don't ship it (they're too much like me and my sister and it's weird for me). I just thought they'd fit the mold better than any other couple I could think of.

*The song is by A Rocket To The Moon. I say this because without that information this song is a bitch to find.

At this point, I feel like I can safely predict which stories I write will become popular. My prediction for this one is it'll be one of many I'm actually kinda proud of, but will get a poor response from the fans.

Of course, I have no problem being proven wrong.
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TDS411 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for sharing this story. Recently, I have been pondering about Alfred (America).
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absoluteanimeaddict Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Student Writer
The lyrics are so sad though, it makes it seem like Al's a little depressed???
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
They're no so much him singing as much as they are something the story's based off of/ inspired by.
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absoluteanimeaddict Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Writer
That's true
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Angeliquediabla Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
This is wonderful...
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! glad you liked it!
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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BunnyUtonium Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Waitwhut? :wtf: revamp saysplz rvmp wtfsaysplz rvmp cap 
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:shrug:
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BunnyUtonium Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student General Artist
ok
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ou8smileydeath Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
it's hard not to like A Rocket to the Moon.
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It really is :nod:
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AndandElsiAndTeaAre Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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This story is amazing! :"D It...it somehow tugged my heartstrings...and the song...and America... *not very good with words*
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! *that's okay; I understand*
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Bluefur101 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Wow! Good song and I like the way you put it in the story!! (You got me hooked XD)
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!
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Bluefur101 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
No problem!!
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LadyFrappe Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Wow I'm going to listen to this song and read this again...
Alfred you're so cute~
Lovina you're so witchy~
Antonio you're butt is so fine~
I'm done xD love the story <3
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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CrushGoddess Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
Never fallen for a boy band? same. fallen for a boy and he rejected you? sure.

My motto:
If the guy doesnt accept you for the way you are, then he is not worth chasing. maybe.



.......PS. I still love him. :icongermanyfacepalmplz:
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconiknowthatfeelplz:
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CrushGoddess Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
:iconglompsomethingplz: :iconkushamisaru:
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Constence1080 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
woah, the song really fits huh?!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup!
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Constence1080 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
yup!
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epicbleachfan998 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Antonio should leave Lovina. For me. <3

Love this story~ Alfred was such a sweetheart~ *dies of cuteness overload*
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha he should just leave her period ;)

Thank you!
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epicbleachfan998 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yup~ She doesn't deserve him~ :iconsexyspainplz:

You're welcome! :iconsuperglompplz:
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LFF2 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's great!! :) You did a great job incorporating the song into the story. :)
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! I'm glad you think so!
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LFF2 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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slowniczek Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
This song is amazing! And I really like how you incorporated it into this story!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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hanadaandrussiana Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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hanadaandrussiana Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
it was just...so beautiful...
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you think so!
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hanadaandrussiana Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
yep....
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KennieKongLee Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww~
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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KennieKongLee Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awsum icon btw *-*
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!

It's just so goregous :iconinloveplz:
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KennieKongLee Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know i love stars :star: I LOVE STARS
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I KNOW!

I love the shooting star in this one. I saw a shooting star once irl; made my decade.
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KennieKongLee Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i can imagine *-* i wish i could see one!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You probably can, you just have to go somewhere far away from city lights.

They're actually a more common occurrence than you might think. :nod:
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frostedcranberries Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconsupertighthugplz: Alfred, just buy me a chocolate milkshake and we'll be square. *is shot* Anyway, good job! :D
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconohyouplz:

Thank you!
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