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Captured in a gaze,
My mind in a haze,
Locked inside this never ending maze


Ahh, there she was again. Francis sighed as he gazed at her longingly. It should be a sin to be as beautiful as she was... to make men have such lustful thoughts.

Acting like it's fake,
Yet only tempting fate,
These desires I know that can not wait


But she was so innocent; he couldn't bring himself to be seductive the way he normally was. Those other girls meant nothing to him anyway, he always imagined her in their place. That was the only way he could enjoy it.

Burning inside 
This pitiful heart
There is a wish 
That tears me apart


So he tried to charm her, desperately trying to win her over. But he was growing impatient.

Ev-er-y word that I say
To steal you away


So he secretly began plotting, thinking of a way he could make her his. Then it hit him; the perfect trap... 

All he had to do was set it.

Fall into my hands and meet every demand
And then, capture this heart again
Everything behind a truth I had confined
Inside, with no place to hide


He invited her over with the intention of treating her to dinner. Well, that's what she thought anyway. God bless her; she was so naive 

Simple-minded words
For you, I uttered
And your guard of choice, you would desert


In an attempt to cover his ass (for the time being), he engaged her in normal conversation; as if he hadn't slipped a little something into her drink. Cantarella, they called it.

Even if it were
A poison most impure,
You'd have taken all without a word


He'd done a lot of research on certain poisons before settling on Cantarella. Obviously he didn't want to kill the girl, just have his way with her. Part of him hoped she'd wake up during it; and that she'd end up loving it... 

She was getting woozy.

You can't escape
Inevitable fate
You've been consumed
By my simple game


Still trying to play innocent was becoming increasingly difficult for Francis. Finally, after all these years of pent up sexual tension, he'd have her... He could feel himself getting excited.

Everything fading away
The next act of the play!


She finally gave into the poison; eyes fluttering close, her body fell limp to the floor. Or it would've, had he not caught her.

We can always find a new place to reside
And then, echo away the time
Stalled before the end, our scent began to blend
And I had been taken again


Francis's whole body tingled with excitement as he carried her to his bedroom. His heart pounded in his chest, his vision blurred, and he felt... hot.

He placed her gently on the bed, stroking her face lovingly. God, she was gorgeous. Like a goddess. Even when they were kids, she was so lovely.

When they were kids...

Suddenly, all these memories came flooding back to him. The memories of how his love - and I do mean love, not the lust he was presently feeling - came to be. Her caring smile, the way she treated him with the upmost kindness, even the adorable way she was blissfully unaware of his feelings... When had his feelings become so perverse?

Fall into my hands and meet every demand
And then, capture this heart again


Tears filled his eyes and spilled onto her face. He... He couldn't do this. Not to her...

Everything behind a truth I had confined...

He didn't even notice the girl's eyes slowly open, and the all too knowledgeable smile on her face. But he definitely heard her voice:

"Make me yours."

Had made you mine!

His eyes widened in shock as he felt her push him off and straddle him, running a finger slowly up his chest and smiling at him seductively

We can always find a new place to reside
And then, echo away the time


At that, he lifted himself up, placing a hand on either side of her face. They stayed like that for a while before leaning into a kiss.

Stalled before the end, our scent began to blend
And I had been taken again
Oh look, I made a serious France reader.

You guys, he's not a rapist. That's why I made this.

I used an English dub of the song, alright? [link] it can be found here
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Aqureshi1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Kya! This is amazing Senpai! I love how you captured Francis's real character!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I try ^-^
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Aqureshi1 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
And you succeeded! You're very welcome Senpai!
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Ray711 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FRANCIS IS SO NOT A RAPIST. He's a gorgeous guy who's nice. And... Who's... Francis-like... In a way... I dunno... Bug I get your point! (Wonderful story.)
Favorited? Check.
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I don't know, maybe I'm just being oversensitive, but I really hate that trope
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Ray711 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Same here! Francis is awesome!!!
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DarkAwesomeness2 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Such great writing! It's so perfect for the song! Good job!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww shucks >///< thank you!
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DarkAwesomeness2 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're so welcome! I've read quite a few of your stories and they are fantastic!! Ahhhh! :iconiloveitplz:
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Your mine Now Francis ^-^
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
indeed he is

and like what the fuck I literally just thought about this story and here I have a comment on it XD
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I was Like France if you Rape me I will Mess you up 
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No.

You listen to me, alright? And you pass on this message. PLEASE.

France.Is.Not.A.Rapist.

This is a stereotype I really hate in the fandom and you will never see it (or rape with any other characters) in my stories.


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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Sorry I do know how you feel though
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh no, you're okay. I wasn't saying you were making that assumption or directing that to you. I just... like sharing my feelings, I suppose ^^;
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ok So Who's your favorite Hetalia Character?
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My favorite is England. Hbu?
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gothicprincess18 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Relizing i hadnt faved this, i read it again ^3^
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you for the fave and the comments!
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gothicprincess18 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconnoproblemplz: :iconjakedanceplz:
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karks1992 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Wow this is incredible, I'm soooo glad you didn't do France as a rapist I don't like stories like that. His torn personality in this is amazing I loved it :)
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!

I really dont like those stories either. Pervy Male doesn't mean Rapist.

I could've phrased that better though ^^;
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karks1992 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
You're welcome :)

No it doesn't. Don't worry I know what you mean, that's usually how I phrase him lol. But he's still a loveable character, who's personality and emotions come across abit whacky sometimes.
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NekoNekoGirl997 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mon amie, so serious.. And so loving. I adore it, it like a fancy kind of dark chocolate that you can't be every much- to be savored and held like a treat.
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's a really nice analogy :3

thank you!
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NekoNekoGirl997 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome lovie
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FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Filmographer
To be perfectly blunt I despise son-fics.
BUT THIS IS AMAZING!!!! :iconsqueeeeplz:
Gah! I love it, and you portrayed France so well!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Whew, you scared me for a sec ^^;

Thanks!
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FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Filmographer
eheheh.. :iconsweatdropplz: Sorry.
But thank YOU. France is my favorite, and the fact that you pulled off such a good story as a song fic just blows my mind! :iconyay:
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww shucks! I'm so glad you liked it!
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GingerAlchemist Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
i love it when people write about this side of France i hate it when some think that he's only got one thing on his mind, but he definitely has a truly loving side.

and i freaking love it!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He does!

And thanks, glad you like it.
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Cutiebat99 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This seems to show that even IF France is a rapist(not), he would still be a gentleman.
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I believe he would
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Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
I like rapist France. I married him because they think he's a rapist.
:iconsexyfrance2plz::iconsaysplz:So this is why we had Matthew?
:iconlakaka99::iconsaysplz:Yep!
:iconsexycanadaplz::iconsaysplz:I do NOT want to know how you too met.
:iconsexyfrance2plz::iconlakaka99::iconsaysplz:Like we would tell.
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... so, does that mean you didn't like it?
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Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
I never said that. I like it, but I like rapist France too. And it's with my favorite song from vocaloid, why would I not like it? (Seriously, I LOVE Cantarella. It's the best song ever.)
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, well in that case I'm glad you like it! ( and :iconikrplz: it's so good)
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Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
How to not like? (I was listening to Cantarella, while reading it)
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Ask-Death-The-Kid Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
(( N'awww~ Very nice, I love it. ^^ ))
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Ask-Death-The-Kid Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
(( No problem, mon ami! ^^ ))
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DarknessOnMyEyes Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is only proof that no matter how tempting it is, Francis would never rape someone.

Thank you for writing this :meow: I loved it, but sadly, there are still people who think he's a creepy, perverted rapist TT^TT
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He really wouldn't :/

I know; that's why I wrote this. Changing minds one story at a time!
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DarknessOnMyEyes Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe I should give it a try, too! :P BUUUUUT, thing is, people who think he's a rapist are generally people who don't like him, so why would they bother clicking in a France x Reader? TT^TT
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's true :/
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DarknessOnMyEyes Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*sighs* :iconokaymemeplz:
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K-chan1 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think this is great! ^^
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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K-chan1 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! ^^ I really like the song too! :3
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